You Can Hurt

If it pleases you to hurt
Then, you hurt others too
Your loved ones, your family
And even your neighbors too
Don't be fooled
Hurting yourself is like a magnetic shock wave
You're only hurting yourself?
Not entirely, but you hurt people around

Though life seems so hard
Though enemy seems to increase
Though you grow weary and marred
How about looking unto Jesus
The author and finisher of our faith
According to His greatness and mercies
We shall overcome trials and are blessed
Let's keep the faith, holding fast
Problems you may have?
O. look onto one another near by
They have it too, don't believe me?
Go to a convalescent hospital
Maybe you'll hurt too!

But...

If it pleases you to hurt
Then, you hurt others too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/10/2010 11:37:00 AM
Thought provoking. Excellent advice. Nice going, Davin. Thanks for your comments. Rgds Ralph
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:07:00 AM
Thank you very much for that in sight. :) Cheers! (Sorry for the late response)
Date: 7/9/2010 5:20:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. there is a free verse contest posted if u care to enter your poem .. a good way to get read and noticed on P.S. with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, sorry for the late response. Cheers! But I will definitely look into the contests of free verse once I start keep up with my writing.
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