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- You Can Do It, Play On -

To justify the dream
                                   realize the potential of music
                           to mirror tones emotionally with caution
                                          Shadowing night
                                   through the hour of hymns
                                     I can barely carry a tune
                                   but, I'm an amazing listener

                                      In sympathetic purpose
                             a soft sound that breaks the silence
                                A world that surrounds the harp
                                      - and its magical sound

                         The weight of a life that is lived in rectitude
                                  A characteristics in the process
                                   - dwell deep within your soul

                                     Sheltering of the true love
                                         it need not be painful
                                          - time for accepting 
                               "If music be the food of love, play on"






03/02/2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Famous poetic lines 2 Poetry Contest
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(If music be the food of love, play on - Shakespeare)

2nd place in the contest
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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I felt the love when reading this poem. I am making it ,y fav. Hugs Sunshine Smile. Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2020 at 6:01 PM
Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 4:05 AM
- Many thanks, for your kind visit and the fave Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lindley Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 3:45 PM
Love this wonderful poem.. Your poetry truly and so deeply shines... Congratulations on your win. God bless..
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 3:50 AM
- Many thanks Robert, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sietesantos Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your grand win! This is such a beauty that I enjoyed reading! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:46 AM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your picture with your poem. Have a wonderful day................
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:46 AM
- Many thanks Paula, for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 3:28 PM
Back with congrats on your podium win, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:45 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 2:48 PM
This is very lovely. My daughter chose to have a harpist play for her wedding on the beach. It is very romantic Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:45 AM
- Sounds like a romantic and beautiful wedding :) - Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 11:41 AM
I am so glad to see this one on the winner's list... beautiful write my friend, congratulations on your win :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 1:36 PM
- Thank you very much, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 10:39 AM
Back with congrats Anne, enjoyed your interpretation of the line. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 1:35 PM
- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, congrats. :)
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 1:35 PM
- Many thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 6:28 AM
a deep take on the line and a great poem for the contest.. we all cant play, but we can listen... nice one.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 7:21 AM
- Always fun to participate, many thanks for my 2rd place on your winning list S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 11:17 AM
You must write a book of poems, you are so talented, each poem is better than the next, if that is possible, they are deep and meaningful and just plain magic! I know this is a winner dear Anne-Lise. Hugs and blessings, Jenny
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 12:20 PM
- Writing a book is a lot of work, my friend - My sister and me are working on a Norwegian book ... with stories and poems ... a work that takes a long time :) - I'm happy you enjoyed it :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 7:15 PM
wow... this is beautiful Anne-Lise... that line really inspired your muse, best wishes in the contest, though it's already a winner in my book... awesome write! hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 6:18 AM
- Thank you very much, Sandra :) - I'm happy you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 4:05 AM
An inspiring poetic work with profound meaning that reaches its calmination on the last line! Excellent dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:02 AM
- Thank you, Demetrios :) - I'm happy you enjoyed it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 2:41 AM
One could say that about your poetry, truly an exceptional wondrous poem.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:01 AM
- Many thanks, my friend Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 4:43 PM
I love the way you applied the theme to your poem, Anne-Lise. I can't play an instrument or sing well, but have always enjoyed listening. What a beautiful poem! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 6:00 AM
- Thank you, Carolyn :) - I'm happy you enjoyed it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 3:31 PM
You always have the most appropriate photos, Anne-Lise. Your words captured the theme aptly for the contest. All the best.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 5:58 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - I'm happy you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Well written Anne, the harp does make a beautiful sound. Good luck. Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 2:33 PM
- Relaxing and beautiful ... we need it sometimes, Tom ... life is like a carousel ... always in speed :) - Many thanks, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 2:17 PM
Wow, this was gorgeous my friend. It rally touched me. I loved everything about it. Best wishes in the contest
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 2:26 PM
- ... my pen went its own way ... thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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