Red Fiery Poet Free verse

You Came Like the Rain

The dead leaves were sparkled;

the splash of rain colored with life.

My barren heart found an immigrant's 
Love,

a sea of desire ruffled with inspiration.

My hands reached for eternity

years of isolation was broken.

Life's meaning was fulfilled.

You came like the Rain

with utmost joy I welcomed You

showered you with all my truism.

But desert is a place for cactus,

love bleeds in my heart.

Heathen Heart and  Heathen soul

they said, 'It was  a storm'...

Redfiery @ 2012,

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Robert Lindley April 4, 2016 at 8:01 AM Simply beautiful writing and a great free verse poem it is my friend. A7

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:05 AM Another great example of turning sorrow into beauty. I would Love to make you happy and then read what you write.

Matthew Anish July 9, 2012 at 2:02 PM Good metaphor here! I have a number of Cacti myself. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Michael Smith June 6, 2012 at 7:03 AM You are really coming into your own like the symphony when they hit the heart string note.

David Williams May 25, 2012 at 12:21 PM Red, passing storm or not, the words just flow wonderfully, I like it a lot..love David

John Rhinem April 29, 2012 at 2:03 PM Smile ˜ I have been searching for You, my sweet beautiful lady * Smashing the lamp unto the floor; come here, my beautiful luv ˜ Always, John!:) ˜

Debra Squyres April 23, 2012 at 11:35 AM hmmm....good or bad storm, I can't decide?? Like your metaphors ....enjoyed !!

Joann Grisetti April 17, 2012 at 5:47 PM I enjoyed our inspiratinal love poem. Great reading it tonight.

Shirley Long April 6, 2012 at 1:52 PM I loved reading your poem today! Good job!