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You build your walls Let me build halls From mansion White Down to the stalls Where poor souls dwell One step from hell Who're tossed about From trough to swell You build your walls Let me build halls Where echoes dance as freedom's calls Where blessings flow for ALL to know That what we preach our actions show You build your walls Let me build halls Where hearts embrace Without the brawls Where all can feel how love can heal And what is shared is warmth, a meal You build your wall It's sure to fall Then we can meet In Love's Grand Hall Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Date: 5/22/2017 1:49:00 AM
Awesome write. Thanks for your always nice comments on my page :) I have two or three called Walls :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 1:09:00 AM
Your hall is a good one. It also needs some perimeter, but plenty of access. This poem is beautiful and encouraging, Kai
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Date: 2/28/2017 2:45:00 AM
You build your wall.... I am not that tall....secrets unveil..... when you know all... ....... Excellent Eileen
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:13:00 PM
Sounds good! Great use of repetition Eileen, very effective. Hugs Rick.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2017 10:29:00 PM
I miss your visits and comments.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2017 7:19:00 PM
Thanks, Rick. Always good to hear from you. Hugs
Date: 2/4/2017 10:44:00 AM
Break down the walls, all come together and dance in harmony...lovely Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Tim. You catch my drift. Hugs
Date: 2/4/2017 10:14:00 AM
I believe in building bridges instead of walls Eileen...I do hope all walls that surround any of us wil fall down..so we can reach eachother.So happy to read such a beauty dear friend.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2017 7:20:00 PM
Of course you do, dear. That's just in your nature. You are as sweet as ever....and I love you.
Date: 2/4/2017 10:06:00 AM
I'll see you there, Eileen:) Very inspirational. Hoping you are well:) Love your poem!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. It's good to have a meeting place. :) I'm doing well....very busy lately. Hugs
Date: 2/4/2017 9:29:00 AM
Hi Eileen, This is a beautiful moving message. Very nice!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Paulette. I'm glad you found it to your liking.

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