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You Broke My Heart

Missing the way you run your fingers through my hair, why this has become a dream in the air? You took care of me like a baby in the cradle, and now stranded me which I cant handle When can I expect that you will be back, will you guarantee that it is before my heart's crack? No matter what, I still love you in the same way, I am sure 'My Love' will return one or the other day My heart and mind is like an early clay, You can mould and shape it in your own way May God soon listens to all my prayers, and sends you to wipe off my rolling tears All I want is the same old love and affection because it is difficult to bear this desertion..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2010 4:13:00 AM

Sad love loss write,,I hope that it is not your life but just a write on the subject..If you life, I feel for you and the pain that you are experiencing ..May you have a blessed day filled with inspiration..Sara

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/23/2010 11:10:00 AM

This is a wonderful sonnet. It flows very well and the rhyming pattern is right on point. I hope the fingers will return soon. Great job! Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/23/2010 3:55:00 AM

It's nice Shakespearean sonnet with nice rhying, Swetha. I like ... My heart and mind is like an early clay...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2010 9:54:00 PM

Understood you in this one, very deep, It hurts from time to time but we just have to see a way through it, and be as positive as positive can be....P.D.