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You Broke Me

You found me broken and torn, Realized I could be reborn, You tore me, You broke me, You put be back together, Make me think it was forever, You filled me head with thoughts of love, But I now realize, It was no love, You played with my heart, You played with my mind, Made me need you like no other, Filled my head with dark thoughts, You found me broken, Put me together piece by piece, The pulled me apart again, All why saying, I love you, My mind is broken, My mind is dark, I hoped you know, You played a part, My life is gone, And so are you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/5/2016 5:47:00 PM
Abbey, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:13:00 PM
Abbey this is such a lovely poem, welcome to Soup, you are quite a gifted writer, all four of these writers below are such gifted writers as yourself, it might pay you to visit their sites sometime, keep your poems coming and take care my fellow Aussie........Vera........
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:58:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Abbey- I choose your first very well written but sad poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:01:00 PM
Hi Abbey, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 10/16/2014 6:31:00 PM
So glad you got rid of him - but your life is NOT gone - take time and then move on and find someone who deserves you:-) excellently penned so full of emotion my friend.hugs Jan xxx Line 14 needs checking - will remove this comment when you alter it
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