Funom Makama Poet Epic

You Boil You Burn

You’re at least a well wisher, so I thought
b’cos of you, I won’t be what I’m not
you’re the grand gangster of your backyard, so what!
your hate is impressively dynamic 
the flames- to others you want to transport
the fuel of anger inside of you is quite a lot
boiling a soul which has long been hot

In your whole life, I’m just a dot
my scored goals shouldn’t be that significant
as for this challenge, heavy ammunition I’ve got
hence you can do me nothing so yourself you should sort.
Grow up and this mess inside you please abort
anyway its your choice
cos the ball has always been in your court

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Arthur Vaso April 15, 2015 at 8:34 PM What a powerful message, poetic, however you have set the exact tone in which this should be expressed to someone holding such useless hate and anger! Brilliant! Funom Makama April 17, 2015 at 11:28 AM thank you a million times arthur

Arthur Vaso April 15, 2015 at 8:34 PM I forgot to say this is A7 for me! Funom Makama April 17, 2015 at 11:27 AM thank you so much arthur

M. L. Kiser April 8, 2015 at 1:11 AM Quite a profound statement, you've made with this poem. Beautifully done. Funom Makama April 13, 2015 at 12:37 PM Thank you so much Kiser.. I really appreciate this

Kim Shaw April 4, 2015 at 10:54 AM What a magnificent write, Funom! I read it four times to absorb its message properly. Very riveting and well said my friend! Hugs, Kimberly Funom Makama April 13, 2015 at 12:36 PM Thanks a million Kimberly... I appreciate your kind words