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You’re at least a well wisher, so I thought b’cos of you, I won’t be what I’m not you’re the grand gangster of your backyard, so what! your hate is impressively dynamic the flames- to others you want to transport the fuel of anger inside of you is quite a lot boiling a soul which has long been hot In your whole life, I’m just a dot my scored goals shouldn’t be that significant as for this challenge, heavy ammunition I’ve got hence you can do me nothing so yourself you should sort. Grow up and this mess inside you please abort anyway its your choice cos the ball has always been in your court

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/15/2015 8:34:00 PM
What a powerful message, poetic, however you have set the exact tone in which this should be expressed to someone holding such useless hate and anger! Brilliant!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/17/2015 11:28:00 AM
thank you a million times arthur
Date: 4/15/2015 8:34:00 PM
I forgot to say this is A7 for me!
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/17/2015 11:27:00 AM
thank you so much arthur
Date: 4/8/2015 1:11:00 AM
Quite a profound statement, you've made with this poem. Beautifully done.
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/13/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thank you so much Kiser.. I really appreciate this
Date: 4/4/2015 10:54:00 AM
What a magnificent write, Funom! I read it four times to absorb its message properly. Very riveting and well said my friend! Hugs, Kimberly
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/13/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thanks a million Kimberly... I appreciate your kind words

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