You Blew Me Away

And the wind blew me away.
No more will I cry.
No more can you lie.
No more blood can be stripped from my veins.
I didn’t exist, I never really did.
All you think you know you can forget.
I’m not in your memory.
I’m not in your thoughts.
Don’t go mad, I’m not worth it. 
Just remember, I’m not real.
You never got this.
I never wrote it to you.
Your smile can remain, because mine faded away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richardson Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 9:03 PM
If someone couldn't see the emotions, passion, creativity and talent in you, they were blind from the start. Great write. ~Des Juan~
Buggs Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Wow.really great write.Written with eloquence.You have friends have a wonderful talent.Love,Jamie
Chappell Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:26 AM
such a great write here my friend [duncan]
Belt Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 9:56 PM
I'm not real.....Great line.....Larry
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