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You Better Not Pout

I told her, ‘You’d better not pout, But Santa has left us both out; Although it annoys: He’s broken our toys And slipped on a stray Brussell sprout.’ For Andrea’s Quintain contest

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Date: 1/9/2015 6:41:00 PM
May you do well in the comp, with this wee gem.
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Scott Thirtyseven
Date: 1/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
Oops I should say, well done in the comp, with this wee gem.
Date: 1/4/2015 5:39:00 PM
Jack,, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2015 5:32:00 PM
A good thing he loves brussel sprouts, or we might be ticking off poor Santa !! LOL !! Cute one, Jack !!
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Date: 1/4/2015 4:04:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:35:00 PM
Excellent meter, Jack. Dang, I almost had this one at third place!! Sorry about that, my friend. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 12/29/2014 8:44:00 AM
lol very funny Jack great pen gl in contest
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Date: 12/28/2014 3:18:00 PM
Well done, Jack! Love your humour. #7 gl in the contest. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/4/2015 3:09:00 PM
Back with deserved congratulations, Jack! Well done. // paul
Date: 12/28/2014 1:30:00 PM
Veggie tales to make us all smile. I hope Santa's litigation won't go to trial. I hear that his elves are still filling shelves. For they've noticed an imbalance as he's counting by twelves. Thanks for the limerick jack. Peace. :)
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Date: 12/28/2014 9:45:00 AM
lol love the humour jack good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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