You Became Somone I Didn'T Know

We date for two years 
You left for Vegas on vacation without me
And I was cool with it
days ago by no word from you
One Saturday night you called crying
I knew something was wrong
You confess to being a other 
My heart stop beating
I couldn't believe 
The man I loved cheated
You said it meant nothing 
You said you where drunk
Then you said it was a man
Asked if I could ever forgive you and take you back
I said no
I couldn't believe what you done
After saying to me over and over again you never cheat on me
You did 
I can't go on loving a man who been with a other 
You where my everything 
And in spilt second you became someone I didn't know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/6/2013 3:21:00 PM
Yeah, that is pretty bad. Not to judge the heart in another but, we're just trying to get beyond this babylonia. A fiery trial indeed. ~ Hang in there baby girl and keep brushing your heart. Love, John
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Date: 11/6/2013 2:04:00 PM
Another shattered heart in the sometimes brutal thing we call love. For the most part lust can overpower love and frequently does. This guy, if you had taken him back, would have more than likely cheated again, but learning the lesson from the first time don't confess his crime.
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