You Ask, I Reply

<  You ask, " How long will you love me"

    I reply, " A lifetime and more".

    You ask. " How long will you be true to me".

    I reply, " As long as a rose is a rose".
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Harris Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:49 PM
This is beautiful. Just as a rose without thorns is yet a rose, that same rose is still a rose no matter how long or short it's existence. ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
Harris Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 8:47 PM
This is beautiful. Just as a rose without thorns is yet a rose, that same rose is still a rose no matter how long or short it's existence. ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Wow..I actually love this piece!! Its amazing how 4 lines can steal your heart away. You did that to me...enjoyed!!! 7
Diliberto Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 8:31 AM
thank you , glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind words.
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April 17, 2015 at 8:30 AM
but a rose will remain a rose however short it's duration, thus true to the end.
Hofert Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 12:15 PM
That's a beautiful write Mary. One that everyone would long to hear and even more so be their reality. A 7 from me. Ed
Diliberto Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 2:57 PM
i know what you mean, wouldn't that be amazing to hear that. Thank you for your kind words.
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April 16, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Cute write, Mary. Welcome to Poetry Soup, dear. You are encouraged to visit other page and leave a comment. PS is haven for kind hearted poets who welcome you to their hearts, as well. HUgs! Kim :)
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