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Without you I feel things differently No longer my lonely content My self-satisfied substance Now it seems vacuous, blank. Without you, I cannot imagine That I have not changed A new globe of enchantment Now possesses me. Without you, I cannot tolerate The absence of your smile Your gentle words Your wisdom Without you, I'm drifting Past desolate shores Suffering these thoughts Without you

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Date: 3/26/2015 6:05:00 PM
Well put. I really like how you start each strophe with "Without you" but then change the rest of the line to keep the poem moving. ~Jan
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:04:00 PM
I can relate to this on so many levels David - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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