You Are What You Feel

Horrifying moment comes 
Wherever you feel scared

Burden appears 
Only when you feel weak

Failure takes place 
Whenever you feel can't
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kithinji Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 10:08 AM
You are what you feel Now feel what you are! Great!
Wesley Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Full of negative feelings that sometimes take over; reminds me to not go there! Love, Lizzie
Horsman Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 9:50 AM
one can only feel admiration for you when reading this wonderful poem...
Ellison Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 8:37 AM
"Can't" has never been a word in my vocabulary! There is always a way... good write! Hugs!
Kovrlija Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 12:49 PM
I agree. Nice poem!
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:19 AM
To feel the horrors of the way to the fingertips, heart up into the throat ... It's a really bad feeling. - A well written poem Dinda, like it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:18 AM
so true,great write Dinda
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