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You Are the Milky Way

Each night I peruse the sky Tilt my head way up high Count the stars here and nigh As if secrets to demystify My heart it seeks to pacify I search beyond each constellation When sense in my heart primal agitation And my pulse beats with acceleration Because it’s there, the object of my aspiration Right there before my eyes, my heart do console I get to see you and talk to you as I stroll Because I’ve recognized your essence, your soul Larger than life, looking down on me, glory be I still feel, though now angel-like, you embracing me There is life after death, you are the Milky Way Elated, I feel light and serene as a heavenly butterfly Seek no further answers or dare question divination Blissfully content to finally feel whole Knowing you are here and there to perpetuity Because there is life after death, you are the Milky Way AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on May 26, 2018 for SKY POETRY CONTEST sponsored by ANTHONY SLAUSEN - RANKED 5TH Submitted on February 5, 2018 for MINUANETTA POETRY CONTEST sponsored by GREGORY BARDEN - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 6/14/2018 12:49:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again! A well-written and relaxing poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/14/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 6/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
Congrats for your well-deserved win, LG, and many thx for your kind comment re my placing in the contest - Bob
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/10/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert. And congrats on your writings.
Date: 6/9/2018 5:22:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win, Line ... well-done!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/9/2018 7:31:00 PM
I thought you'd recognize this one, Gregory. Thanks.
Date: 6/8/2018 4:40:00 PM
Congrats dear. Was so happy to see your name as one of the winners :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Natasha. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/30/2018 1:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win. Your poem is a cosmic beauty, indeed.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal.
Date: 4/29/2018 3:41:00 PM
I love this theme also, Line, and you imaged the deep spirituality of feeling at one with the beauty and mystery of the Cosmos. Congrats on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2018 1:32:00 PM
I just loved this right from the start, Line, and is a favorite subject of mine, but you managed the difficult form with ease, and write such a beautiful poem full of wonderful imagery and metaphor ... exquisite write! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gregory. A most fun and challenging challenge! LOL
Date: 4/29/2018 10:44:00 AM
Congrats on win, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, John.
Date: 4/29/2018 8:43:00 AM
Line, this is tender and comforting for me to read. Congratulations on your win. There is much to be the healing powers in universe. I feel some of this when I'm looking up at night too. An awesome minuanetta.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/29/2018 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your great win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/28/2018 11:41:00 PM
Well done dear :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thanks, Natasha. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/15/2018 8:06:00 PM
I am trying to recall what I entered for this one. Maybe the winner list was small since I see no congrats underneath this one. I think your take was very original, Line. To imagine life as the Milky Way. This is great creativity.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 9:05:00 PM
No, Gregory said people asked him to extend the deadline so it still has not been judged.
Date: 2/10/2018 10:31:00 AM
WOW! I am learning a lot from you! Your enviable talent shines in all your works! Excellent entry in Greg's contest! Good luck, my friend! Hugs. Pandita.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2018 10:36:00 AM
You are TOO kind, Pandita. Thank you for your praise though I'm not sure how much is warranted. I'll take it to balance with the unwarranted crap I may get from elsewhere. LOL
Date: 2/5/2018 3:00:00 PM
Beautifully emotional and moving poem, Line! Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 3:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/5/2018 1:41:00 PM
You have a quick wit, gentle heart, strong faith and a colorful imagination ...a deadly combination to success. Your poem comes alive and wrenches the heart with the strong emotions so well imposed with the superb imagery. Emile.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/5/2018 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Emile. I am deeply flattered. Best wishes.

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