Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

- You Are So Beautiful -

A Heart of strawberries
                                  Sugar and cream
                             Magic are those moments
                                      Like the sun
                        The night can not be extinguished
                                  As a roaring wave
                                 No beach can break
                          Eternal owned warm friendships
                           Feeling of being an enjoyment
                                     Who are you
                               With stars in your eyes
                                The white dove flying
                          Throughout the evening glows


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01.09.2014
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Timothy Hicks October 17, 2014 at 1:50 AM MMM... I love strawberries... great comparison to the warm feelings of love. Exquisite phrasing in this poem... who are you with stars in your eyes? I love how you never really answer the question, but leave it open to interpretation :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2014 at 2:26 AM - So glad you liked my poem - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Timothy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Satekge October 1, 2014 at 2:25 AM I enjoy your love poems, you always keep them so simple. Lovely read. Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2014 at 2:28 AM - So glad you liked my poem - You Are So Beautiful - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Victor :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Antony Rodrigues September 24, 2014 at 1:28 PM This is really beautiful! It's inspiring and warmed my soul :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2014 at 2:32 PM - So glad you liked my poem, Antony - You Are So Beautiful - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Mayrose September 21, 2014 at 8:54 AM Beautifully written, I really enjoyed reading this...Thank you..... Anne-Lise Andresen September 21, 2014 at 11:54 AM - So glad you liked my poem, Jim - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nasser Alabdali September 11, 2014 at 4:59 AM your poem touched my heart! so easy to read and extremely beautiful. you combined all natural elements to reveal the essence of beauty. I loved it. Have a beautiful day! Nasser :). Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2014 at 5:02 AM - So glad you liked my poem, Nasser - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock September 8, 2014 at 12:21 PM Finding beauty in nature is simply beautiful. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2014 at 12:32 PM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments, dear Phyllis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Thomas Mansfield September 7, 2014 at 8:59 AM mmmmmm such simplicity.. such beauty.. such a light and lucid message transmitted so naturally, as Mother Nature herself has done here within your words.... Thank you Anne-Lise xxx Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2014 at 9:07 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments Thomas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo September 5, 2014 at 6:04 PM Your poem is so, so beautiful. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen September 6, 2014 at 3:42 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments dear Lucilla - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak September 5, 2014 at 7:38 AM Simply beautiful expressions of friendship and love. Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2014 at 8:18 AM - So glad you liked my poem,Monterey - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Danka Sikorska September 5, 2014 at 3:00 AM A very romantic poem ;) Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2014 at 3:01 AM - Danka,thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner September 4, 2014 at 2:11 PM A very pretty poem Anne...Love's touch of joy..." Feeling of being an enjoyment..." I like this! J.A.B. Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2014 at 2:28 PM - Justin,thanks for your nice visit and comments - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus September 4, 2014 at 1:36 PM You are lucky, Anne Lise, to find beauty in simple yet beautiful things. This is a short but lovely write. Much enjoyed. Thank you for giving us your pretty heart at the end of the poem:) // paul Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2014 at 1:39 PM - A heart can be shared with many... - thanks for your nice visit and comments, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath September 4, 2014 at 1:01 PM I really missed earlier to read this wonderful poem. Glittering stars healing words you have used in perfect sense of friendships. Nicely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2014 at 1:04 PM - It's never too late ..... welcome when you have time,bl - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell September 4, 2014 at 10:34 AM lovely stuff Anne-Lise, really puts me in mood for strawberries sugar and cream!! you put such a nice flow into this piece, excellent indeed, God bless, Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2014 at 11:19 AM - So glad you liked my poem - Beautiful And Forever - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Gordon :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser September 3, 2014 at 2:12 PM Well written, fun to read and beautiful. Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2014 at 2:58 PM - Thank you M.L. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne September 3, 2014 at 12:41 PM I had a need to visit you again. You are so supportive of so many of us. You are like an angel visiting everyone with your blessings. I thank you for all you do. I also added this to my favorite poem list. I hope everyone else does too. Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2014 at 12:47 PM - Really lovely words, Maurice !!! .... thanks for the visit and that you will fav. this ..... it is an honor !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nurudeen Olaniran September 2, 2014 at 7:27 AM You are my love. that answers it. Anne this is beautiful. thank you for your comment Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 12:03 PM - To sprinkle a little sugar is better than salt .... thanks for the visit and comments, Nurudeen - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 2, 2014 at 6:38 AM Ahh!! Romantic..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visit..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 11:59 AM - A little romance for you .... thanks for the visit and comments, Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis September 2, 2014 at 3:45 AM With a heart like this nothing less would be expected, Anne Lise! Wonderful! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 12:07 PM - Nice to see you dear friend,Demetrios - thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso September 2, 2014 at 12:08 AM Wow wow wow!!!!! I think is obvious to all, that you have a very kind heart filled with strawberries!!!!! The heart you drew is soooooo beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 12:01 PM - Sweet strawberry with sweet heart fit well together :)) .... thanks for the visit and comments, Arthur - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer September 1, 2014 at 7:30 PM this is just lovely, anne lise! i enjoyed it! Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2014 at 11:56 AM - A pleasure to see you and thanks for the comments Ilene - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres September 1, 2014 at 2:25 PM fabulous write... simple and amazingly crafted!! :") This poem deserves a two thumbs up! way to go... Have a great day ahead ,my dear Anne! ^_^ Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2014 at 2:28 PM - Two thumbs are top ..... - Nice to see you dear friend, AiyaH !!! - thank you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson September 1, 2014 at 2:16 PM Like the sun the night can not be extinguished. Beautiful, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2014 at 2:29 PM - Thank you dear Faye :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne September 1, 2014 at 1:23 PM WoW. this poem is excellent. it is so good i swear it's as if i see a heart below it. Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2014 at 1:29 PM .......your heart as proof of honesty - Thank you,Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid September 1, 2014 at 12:51 PM very beautifully painted picture excellent piece Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2014 at 12:56 PM - Thank you my friend, Liam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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