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You Are Perfection

All the most gorgeous ladies in the world Will never match the beauty of you It shines from your every pore From every loving word you utter A unique blend of visual and internal beauty The likes of which I have only dreamt of The vision of you overwhelms me to the extreme Beyond anything I have ever experienced Like a sculptured beauty written about for centuries An example of an exquisite womanly form Combining all the elements of perfection When I'm with you, nothing else exists The world becomes silent and still Only the murmurs of our heart beating together A supreme rapture unequaled You are more beautiful in my eyes Than all the most beautiful ladies in the world In my eyes, you are perfection © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 3/1/2014 8:21:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh...thank you. Back at ya.....:-) :-)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/1/2014 8:28:00 AM
Tried to keep it OUR little secret but I guess Iblew it!!! Love ya Ms. Perfection! Jacko! XOXOX
Date: 2/24/2014 4:20:00 PM
This one of your best takes I love yet Jack...You must still be in a state of euphoria from the Hockey Gold.....Tim
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Date: 2/24/2014 4:49:00 PM
Ya sure got that right!!! WOO HOO! THEY are perfection!!! Jack
Date: 2/24/2014 12:08:00 PM
ooh you old romantic dear brother Jack, she sure is a lucky woman. your cyber sis Jan xxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/24/2014 3:22:00 PM
Hey sis! Whatta charmer eh!!! LOL Hugs brother Jack XOXOX
Date: 2/24/2014 10:32:00 AM
Any woman would melt at hearing this, Kenny...this poem is.....PERFECTION
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/24/2014 10:34:00 AM
Then my mission's accomplished dear Queen Eileen! Many big hugs and kisses... Kenny! XOXOX
Date: 2/24/2014 8:41:00 AM
Wow! But remember... Tho I may be great on paper.You're still a Cathie sort of a guy!... I can't believe that Dragon! He thinks you were writing about him. Honestly! Silly Dragon! He's preening in front of all his cave mirrors, all 100 of them! He's decided to bling out a mirror in honor of what you've said... I think he should forget it... He's got too much bling already... in his head! OOOPPPS! He heard me! Stop snorting you silly thing! Of course I was talking about you!... Well, Gotta run!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/24/2014 10:46:00 AM
How did you know I was referring to you? Was it that obvious? LOL Please don't tell Cathie, okay!!! XOXOXOX
Date: 2/24/2014 6:23:00 AM
Nice one Jack, Steve
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/24/2014 6:34:00 AM
Thank you my friend... Jack

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