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You Are Near

A gentle beam of the sun Touches locks of your beautiful hair, And the sudden breeze of the fresh salty air Brings the thoughts of indescribable joy and quietness... And it seems, that the time now has lost its usual run, And the day has strengthened its brightness. The sweet song of a nightingale Flows into the peaceful and warm atmosphere, I feel your gentle touch and we see how there In the blue sunny sky spindrift clouds appear... I raise the anchor in order to sail For I know you are near... ~~~~~)(~~~~~

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Skat A

Date: 2/19/2015 6:51:00 PM

Albert:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Neva Romaine

Date: 2/17/2015 10:12:00 AM

Hey Albert, Congratulations on your beautifully expressed and imaginative poem being featured this week. Well done. Be Blessed. Neva

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2015 5:31:00 AM

- Welcome to P Soup, Albert - A pleasure to read your first beautiful poem, thank you chose to share it here with us - I wish you a nice day - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2015 1:11:00 AM

Hi Albert, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:59:00 PM

Albert, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2015 3:22:00 PM

Love the gentle feelings that you manage to transmit, Albert. #7 (your surname sounds Maltese or Italian). All the best. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2015 3:10:00 PM

Such delightful romantic imagery I loved this gentle flowing write:-) Hugs Jan xx