You Are - My Double Etheree

You are my dark, smooth and richly flavored double-espresso. You’re the deliciousness in my cup that always I’ll wish to drink up. You also are a double scoop of yummy ice cream. So luscious are you – my chocolate dream. You greet me with such delight you are like a double door – the passageway for me is is open wide, filled with light. Your generous heart is a double bed that gives me my space! You could be double trouble; that would be fine by me.
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 12:34 PM
So cute and lighthearted! Love this, Andrea!
Godwin Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 4:09 PM
Beautiful, beautiful ... CayCay
Narain Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Nice double Etheree poem. Hot chocolate is heart warming anytime.
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Ahhh!!! Not sure whether to understand this one from the literal or from metaphorical thought. No matter which way it is delightful. Thank you for sharing the two sides of the coin. At one time, I was getting a Chocolate Moolatte several times a week until I looked up how many calories it had then I had to leave it alone. Now can't have the caffeine. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 2:40 AM
waw, really loved this declaration, and the invitation to the desserts, isn't it what love is made for ? this taste so good, thanks andrea
Singh Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 9:19 PM
A playful,romantic and appreciative description .of someone who makes life richer,sweeter,and more enjoyable.Beautiful.
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