You Are My Center

The light I see within your eyes 
shines like a million suns
with darkness vanquished, cast away
to never be outdone

Your heart I see, it resonates
a love that beats, at core
allowing me to know you well
and never want for more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/17/2008 4:28:00 PM
Does she know how lucky she is? Great poem.
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Date: 7/9/2008 4:39:00 PM
Micheal you are so talented I love your romantic side you can say so much with so few words I admire you as a great writer! Great write here! Laura :)
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Date: 7/8/2008 6:50:00 PM
Such a gentle and lovely love poem. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/8/2008 6:43:00 PM
Alright now. Sounds like someone is falling in love. Great write.
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Date: 7/8/2008 6:21:00 PM
Interesting reflection on love. I just found out that The Soup was up today. It's fun catching up on our poetry family. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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Date: 7/8/2008 6:11:00 PM
Short, beautiful and full of love - great job
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Date: 7/8/2008 5:21:00 PM
Hello Michael I just love the heartfelt sentiments in this lovely poetic write. It's just beautiful! It's flow is perfecto! Take care hun Love Light Truth Patricia
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