You Are Mine

When you look at me and wink
I try so hard not too blink
I don’t want too miss that wink
I look disinterested but that’s what you think

I thought nothing was safe
so i put my heart in a safe
I gave my heart too you
yes this is true

You took care of it
you didn’t hurt it
you aren’t like the rest
you are the best

You are mine
but you have a lot too find
i’m not the average girl
so you are in for a whirl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2014 at 6:00 AM
Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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May 26, 2014 at 9:05 PM
That's a nice fun poem :) Ana
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May 26, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Life Is A Midnight Carousel! Congratulations, Upon Your Beauty's Lovely Rhyme In Feature: Mercedes....Love, Jeremy *
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May 15, 2014 at 9:14 AM
MERCEDES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 10, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Mercedes, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 9, 2014 at 3:11 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Mercedes :) - I choose your first sweet written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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