You Are Mine

Saints gave you souls of growing 
Humans coined  you a shape of flesh 
The Sun made you bright and warming
The Moon decorated  you  soft and gentle 

Your movings liked the willow dancing
In the stream and onshore, they're winding,
You are waiting and you are looking 
For the lucked ones seduced to come

We deemed to meet each other  somewhere 
Within the periods of short-living time,
No matter it's  determined or just by chance 
Indeed when you are in front of me 
I saw your eyes shining on my dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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August 22, 2019 at 6:12 PM
So lovely my friend. This was a wonderful read... Ann
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August 22, 2019 at 7:59 PM
I am glad to know you like it. Take care. Xuefeng Pan
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April 10, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Oh such a beautiful romance, Xuefeng. Your poetic imagery is so soft and alluring like; 'The Sun made you bright and warming The Moon decorated you soft and gentle' - so enchanting! Also, my other favorite lines; 'Indeed when you are in front of me I saw your eyes shining of my dream.' - so pure of a love that's meant to be. I enjoyed the superb artistry throughout your lovely poem, Xuefeng. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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April 30, 2019 at 9:58 AM
Thanks a lot indeed, Susan, please excuse me for my delayed reply. Best wishes to you, like your poems very much!
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