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You Are Mine

Saints gave you souls of growing Humans coined you a shape of flesh The Sun made you bright and warming The Moon decorated you soft and gentle Your movings liked the willow dancing In the stream and onshore, they're winding, You are waiting and you are looking For the lucked ones seduced to come We deemed to meet each other somewhere Within the periods of short-living time, No matter it's determined or just by chance Indeed when you are in front of me I saw your eyes shining on my dream.

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/22/2019 6:12:00 PM

So lovely my friend. This was a wonderful read... Ann

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 8/22/2019 7:59:00 PM

I am glad to know you like it. Take care. Xuefeng Pan

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/10/2019 8:40:00 PM

Oh such a beautiful romance, Xuefeng. Your poetic imagery is so soft and alluring like; 'The Sun made you bright and warming The Moon decorated you soft and gentle' - so enchanting! Also, my other favorite lines; 'Indeed when you are in front of me I saw your eyes shining of my dream.' - so pure of a love that's meant to be. I enjoyed the superb artistry throughout your lovely poem, Xuefeng. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Xuefeng Pan
Date: 4/30/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thanks a lot indeed, Susan, please excuse me for my delayed reply. Best wishes to you, like your poems very much!