Robert Long Mellott Poet Concrete

You Are Here

You are here
                                                          X 

                                                         Me 
                                                     Fine Line 

                                                  You love me 
                                              now you hate me 
                                           what will our fate be? 

                                    A world so full of love, passion 
                              Intellectual talks, soft kisses & touches 
                          Feelings of total trust and complete security-
                                             A sweet miracle. 

                       A world of blame, sarcasm and yelling rushes in 
                     Saying terrible things that can never be taken back 
                                      Feeling so alone & betrayed- 
                                               A true tragedy.
                                              I believe in you- 
                                             I'm scared of you 
                                            I'm so proud of me 
                                          Then so disappointed. 

                                                 RLM '06

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2011 at 5:12 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Robert. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta March 1, 2011 at 9:21 AM Fine layout on concrete form with nice expressions on you are here, Robert