Notes About The Poem

Unrhymed quatrain

You Are An Angel

I think we are ment 
To be together source of light 
Give me one hour  
of your precious time 

I will give you 
a brand new life 
As this earth changes around 
growing inside our union 

The pathway 
is clear cut diamond 
as you command 
the rising deep ocean waves 

I warmly salted them with spices
As they rise and fall calming ocean breaths 
Softly mesmerised 
loving your beauty 

Turning the wheel 
steering this ship 
blowing in one direction sings 
I hunger your love 

Source of each other 
Can be found a million miles away 
we feast at the alter of purity 
With wings we fly together from the final table
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fiery Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:27 AM
This is definetly a marvel... Liked the way you have put all the beautiful words togather. You are one of the best romantic poets on soup !!!! A7 from me ... Cheers ~Red
Petersen Potter Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:59 PM
"Give me one hour of your precious time I will give you a brand new life" Touching sentiment. Beautiful write, sir. -G
Mcdaid Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 6:14 PM
Thank you for such kindness deeply appreciated wishing you a blessing of a week
Trifiatis Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:49 PM
What a romantic writing my friend, Liam! I am certain she will not give you an hour only but her entire life! Wonderful!
Mcdaid Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 6:13 PM
Thank you kindly dearest pal so happy you liked it sometimes a person prays hard enough wishes that are granted one day maybe true bless you demetrios always a pleasure to see you sorry I am not around a lot these days been kept busy
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