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Unrhymed quatrain

I think we are ment To be together source of light Give me one hour of your precious time I will give you a brand new life As this earth changes around growing inside our union The pathway is clear cut diamond as you command the rising deep ocean waves I warmly salted them with spices As they rise and fall calming ocean breaths Softly mesmerised loving your beauty Turning the wheel steering this ship blowing in one direction sings I hunger your love Source of each other Can be found a million miles away we feast at the alter of purity With wings we fly together from the final table

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Date: 5/16/2016 9:27:00 AM
This is definetly a marvel... Liked the way you have put all the beautiful words togather. You are one of the best romantic poets on soup !!!! A7 from me ... Cheers ~Red
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Date: 5/15/2016 6:21:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:59:00 PM
"Give me one hour of your precious time I will give you a brand new life" Touching sentiment. Beautiful write, sir. -G
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liam mcdaid
Date: 5/15/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thank you for such kindness deeply appreciated wishing you a blessing of a week
Date: 5/15/2016 5:49:00 PM
What a romantic writing my friend, Liam! I am certain she will not give you an hour only but her entire life! Wonderful!
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liam mcdaid
Date: 5/15/2016 6:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly dearest pal so happy you liked it sometimes a person prays hard enough wishes that are granted one day maybe true bless you demetrios always a pleasure to see you sorry I am not around a lot these days been kept busy