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Trilogy Poetry Form Description: "Trilogy Poetry" was created by Joseph S. Spence Sr. on June 19, 2020, while studying English literature, creative writing, Japanese linguistics, mythology, and the African Diaspora at the University of Wisconsin, Milwaukee. It proliferates the interconnectedness of the mind, body, and soul ("Three Entities")! The essential thesis symbolizes inspiration, cooperation, and integration. The poem is longer than "Lines of Antiquity of Microbes" by Arum Saroyan. It's no less than two regular stanzas forming an octave in poetic notations. It's not as long as the epic Mahabharata regarding the Kuru Kingdom. It ends with no more than twenty-four lines like a Malaysian Pantoum, French Rondelet, or Claudette Sonnet. The poem may comprise any imaginative architecture to arrive at its encapsulating end. No requirement exists for using Shakespearean iambic pentameter, interlocking rhyming schemes, or syllabic accentuations. This is just pure down-to-earth and people-centric poetry. The thesis relates to three entities: person, place, or thing. The corresponding themes should enunciate unity, balancing vision, and overcoming, leading to clarity and a victorious journey.

You’re an inspiration of God’s grace.
It shows all over your smiling face.
Such bewilderment and dynamic amazement
Touching humanity with such ordainment

You’re an aspiration from God’s dynamic place.
Where birds, bees, flowers, and trees embrace.
Such unity of oneness uplifts precious souls
Reaching heights, yet never told, now unfolds

You’re a supplication from God’s vibration.
That which touches creation with astounding dedication.
Springing forth life, multiplying, astounding, jubilation
Cherubim celestial celebration of angelic enunciation

You’re a quilted tapestry of God’s precious love.
The heart of humanity unfolds such a majestic dove.
Where have you been? Behind which cloud?
Ah—enlightenment seen! A marvelous vision unshroud!

You’re, you’re, you're…!

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