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You and Me

The day I was all alone with my all surrounding’s air blown.. you found me.. that lovely day caught me as a prey Now u r mine I got my shine I really get shy whenever see in ur eyes full of love flewing lyk dove is it attraction or my crush whatever it is juzz make me blush is it something or juzz a trash it makes me a sentence wid too many slash.. I am confused and got totally fused later everything got change u r now totally in my range now I juzz wanna fly in sky oderwise me gonna die of shy my lyf is somewhat getting lazy n m becoming a little bit crazy :p Itz lyf’s true test where no one is best chats oon facebook changed me totally now m juzz left wid a glee oh god! please juzz do some miracles! give me power to tackle dese obstacles! juzz trembling with a fear after I chose u which concerns abot a tear which I will have if I lose u ittz far from ordinary a love so pure and true.. itz a common destiny where wewere meant to be juzz you n me.:)

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Date: 10/9/2024 8:52:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:01:00 PM
vyas, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 3:43:00 PM
Rini, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/28/2013 10:10:00 AM
I have this confession to make...You are a great poet your work is just mwa;
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