You and I

Two sides of a coin we are Without you, I don't exist! Neither you, nor I and Alas! We are one!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcdaid Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 6:38 PM
beautifully painted wishing you a blessed day
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 8:28 PM
thank you liam for the lovely comment and your time :)) God bless
Shahid Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 4:26 AM
Thanks You too!
Shahid Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:19 AM
I'm new here. Help me through.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 3:57 AM
Ya sure..don worry..i was also new here...i bet, you gonna love PS..wishing you a very happy christmas :)
Shahid Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Discreet! Well balanced.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Thank you Parray... God bless :))
A   Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Interesting poem, glad every toss has an outcome. LINDA
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 2:27 AM
Thank you Linda :) :*
Inman Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Really liked this. Two different parts to form a whole. Read all of your posted poems and look forward to reading more.
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Thank you so much for your time and inspiration, James. ??
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Very nicely written, Punnia. What an extraordinary allegory you use for two people in love! 7, Sandra
Viswan Bhatia Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Thank you Sandra :) Love and peace to you <3
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