You and I

we shed our garments 
that lay on the cool tile 
on the hottest day 
no one existed 

except you and i
and the pelican at bay 
you wrapped wonderfully 
around myself caressing

my thoughts my mind 
my heart ran wild 
as the tides raised in me 
an excitement of joy

catered beneath my 
panting lure ah ah ah 
nestled a tranquil finding 

of you and i 
dancing inside my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 12, 2011 at 5:21 PM
very romantic i like this , very good write and an uplifting poem
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