'you' and 'I'

I saw distress 
in every bit of life,
with the touch of success
here and there that
I don’t notice;
I don’t know your motive and
I complained.
I complained about your gifts,
I attacked you for giving me intelligence – 
not opportunity,
‘Disdained you for giving me splendor – 
not romance;
But now
I realize
regret comes 
as the crown of delight;

You are the All.
There’s no ‘I’ 
in the route;
My body, mind might suffer but
My soul – 
connected to You,
always;
At total bliss and 
at absolute pain
and beyond,
I am united with You – 
part of You.
I pray for your tenderness
to hold my hands
ever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 9, 2010 at 9:05 AM
nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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