You and I

~ You and I ~ 

Down comes the rain
   pelting the ground
Out comes the sun
   with a rainbow crowned
Along comes the wind
   lapping up puddles
Nature's at play... You and I
   ~ we snuggle and cuddle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 5/31/2020 12:04:00 PM
I loved reading this poem it put a smile on my face. The images you painted were extremely poignant. I saw the rain, the puddles, the rainbow...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/31/2020 12:59:00 PM
Thanks for 'climbing into the wayback machine' to dig this one out, Valerie. And thanks for your kind words. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 12:08:00 PM
This was amazing Gershon! Brought a smile to my face! So sweet! Sorry I have not been on comments things aren't too good at the moment! But all I need to do is come read one of your beauties and I can smile! Thank you for that!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/5/2019 7:19:00 PM
You my friend have helped me thank you for that!;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 1:25:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear that things aren't too good. I guess about the only way I can help is to write verse that makes you smile and encourage you with your ever-more-wonderful writes! I'll do my best, Brenda. Thank you for all of the help you have been and continue to be for me. Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 10:55:00 AM
Dr. Romance strikes again. Loved this one my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:35:00 AM
This 'Doctor's' pen could always use a little surgical repair, methinks... Thank you so much for the encouragement, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 8:34:00 AM
So sweet... Bless you
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for the sweet comment, Regina! Blessings, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 7:46:00 AM
This is darling. xomo
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:34:00 AM
It takes a darling to know 'darling,' I (now) always say. Thanks, Mo! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 5:27:00 AM
Weather for leather, they say...Nice one
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:33:00 AM
Hey, Arturo! Never heard that before (i.e., 'weather for leather.') That's a great phrase, a reel 'keeper.' Thanks, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 4:01:00 AM
How seet Gershon..need a cuddler Panagiota xxx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thanks, Panagiota. I know you're a cuddler and a snuggler too (from reading your sigh-inducing poems)! Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 10/4/2019 1:45:00 AM
A beautiful write written for your wife and I am sure this was well received.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thanks, Caren! ~ Still snuggling in Chicago...
Date: 10/3/2019 9:14:00 PM
LOL, Gershon we are connect I just wrote a poem about rainbows super LOL GREAT write my friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/4/2019 11:31:00 AM
Oh, no! I would never STEAL your Muse. I just BORROWED your Muse for a couple spins around the block. You know! If I could just find his keys, I'd return him to you right away... LOL Thanks, my friend. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Bobby May
Date: 10/3/2019 9:18:00 PM
Did you steal my muse?
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