You Amaze Me

I could speak endlessly about your beauty,
But words would fail to capture its essence,
For it is a rarity that defies comparison,
A beauty that surpasses all pretense.

Yet, I feel compelled to write these lines,
To convey how you make everything more divine,
Your presence alone adds a touch of magic,
Making even the simplest things look fantastic.

Your beauty is beyond imagination,
A mesmerizing wonder to behold,
Every feature so delicately crafted,
A sight that never gets old.

With you, everything is more wonderful,
And life is more incredible,
You are the only reason why I loved once,
And only once, like never before, never again.

Your beauty is a gift,
A source of wonder and delight,
And I am grateful for every moment,
Spent basking in your radiant light.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/16/2023 8:43:00 PM
A terrific write! Such a superb celebration of beauty. Many congratulations. Sincerely, Brian
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Date: 3/19/2023 12:33:00 AM
Truly, and inspirational write In the Lord’s grace is everything is so much peaceful. Thank you for enjoying this piece.
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Date: 2/6/2018 12:21:00 PM
a truly beautiful poem written from the heart Hempstone:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/8/2017 4:35:00 PM
You amaze me, Hempstone, with this strong, heart-felt write. I enjoyed the beauty and passion of your sentiments immensely.
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Kabutha Paul Hempstone
Date: 10/8/2017 10:33:00 PM
Indeed Susan.Thank you so much
Date: 7/11/2017 9:49:00 AM
That's a powerful poem. Well written. Please comment on my poetry also. Thank you.
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Date: 7/10/2017 1:53:00 PM
Heartfelt and overall excellent! I love it bro! Strong work!
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Date: 5/14/2017 6:17:00 PM
Hello Hempstone, "You Amaze Me" is truly written from the heart with a sweet power and passion. What a neat verse. True Love is so very important!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 5/12/2017 1:02:00 PM
Nice piece Macharia.
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Date: 5/3/2017 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations Hempstone on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS
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Kabutha Paul Hempstone
Date: 5/3/2017 12:50:00 PM
i really appreciate HANS
Date: 5/3/2017 8:36:00 AM
Greetings, Hempstone. Congrats for your well, deserved top placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Kabutha Paul Hempstone
Date: 5/3/2017 12:55:00 PM
thanks a lot Teddy.congrats too!love your creative piece of work.
Date: 5/2/2017 10:22:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful, great poetry. And that must be true love :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Kabutha Paul Hempstone
Date: 5/2/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot Darren.
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