You Amaze Me

I could speak endlessly about your beauty,
But words would fail to capture its essence,
For it is a rarity that defies comparison,
A beauty that surpasses all pretense.

Yet, I feel compelled to write these lines,
To convey how you make everything more divine,
Your presence alone adds a touch of magic,
Making even the simplest things look fantastic.

Your beauty is beyond imagination,
A mesmerizing wonder to behold,
Every feature so delicately crafted,
A sight that never gets old.

With you, everything is more wonderful,
And life is more incredible,
You are the only reason why I loved once,
And only once, like never before, never again.

Your beauty is a gift,
A source of wonder and delight,
And I am grateful for every moment,
Spent basking in your radiant light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sambourne Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 8:43 PM
A terrific write! Such a superb celebration of beauty. Many congratulations. Sincerely, Brian
Roper Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 12:33 AM
Truly, and inspirational write In the Lord’s grace is everything is so much peaceful. Thank you for enjoying this piece.
Allison Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 12:21 PM
a truly beautiful poem written from the heart Hempstone:-) hugs jan xx
Ashley Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 4:35 PM
You amaze me, Hempstone, with this strong, heart-felt write. I enjoyed the beauty and passion of your sentiments immensely.
Paul Hempstone Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 10:33 PM
Indeed Susan.Thank you so much
Schiavina Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 9:49 AM
That's a powerful poem. Well written. Please comment on my poetry also. Thank you.
Vee Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Heartfelt and overall excellent! I love it bro! Strong work!
Bateman Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 6:17 PM
Hello Hempstone, "You Amaze Me" is truly written from the heart with a sweet power and passion. What a neat verse. True Love is so very important!! Best Wishes, Gary
Otieng Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Nice piece Macharia.
Selfa Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations Hempstone on winning the MAY DAY PREMIER contest!!! I hope to see more of your poems in the future for I truly enjoy your works. Keep up the good work :) -HANS
Paul Hempstone Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 12:50 PM
i really appreciate HANS
Kimathi Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Greetings, Hempstone. Congrats for your well, deserved top placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
Paul Hempstone Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 12:55 PM
thanks a lot Teddy.congrats too!love your creative piece of work.
White Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 10:22 AM
This is absolutely wonderful, great poetry. And that must be true love :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Paul Hempstone Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Thanks a lot Darren.
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