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You Alone

Look at you, you have found my heart With love I stare into your eyes With passion I devise I can not part with you or can not stop the things I have started So I raise my hands to embrace you and you alone Look I walk by your side and I found my self crying With your hands so soft with gentleness With your smile so beautiful with carefulness I do notice life with you without sighing So I raise my hands to embrace you and you alone Without a fear of losing you, you are in my visions With beautiful roses by your side I love you more than twelve times Without doubt I do love you, I care for you and you alone So do not walk away Please lets talk about things anyway With feelings of letting you go is make me ache in the heart Do not stop believing my passion has fallen apart So I raise my hands to embrace you and you alone Look I want us to grow old with each other through years of journeys With hope of sharing life of fulfillment that gives us memories With this I hope to give all of my faith and I hope it is not to late I Look into your eyes with such full life because you have been my life date So I raise my hands to embrace you and you alone And you alone So I raise my hands to embrace you you alone

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Date: 4/3/2013 2:31:00 PM
I like how you repeated the main lines and formatted them at the ending of this one. This is a very romantic write for a special someone!
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Date: 4/3/2013 11:55:00 AM
I love your echo--ing words and thoughts.
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Date: 4/2/2013 3:22:00 PM
i'm not much of a critic when it comes to lyrics having only written one or two. However this one seems a bit long. I believe a lyric consists of two stanzas, a chorus, and a bridge. I didn't see that here unless I missed it..
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