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You Almost Fit

You almost fit with harmony, But almost would be the death of me, You came real close to complimenting my space, But real close would leave me in an empty place, The puzzle piece I can no longer wedge, I made my vow and said my pledge, Later on deep regret would follow, And once again I'd become hollow, You almost fit with ecstasy, But almost would be the death of me. By: Sabina Nicole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/17/2011 11:06:00 AM
Wishing you Merry Holidays and happy New Year!!!Almost not quit good enought Sabina, as you said. Nice vers, Congrats on your worthy poem place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:06:00 AM
Enjoyed this.Congratulations Sabina; that is a family name im my fathers line. Happinees to you and yours x
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Date: 12/16/2011 10:50:00 PM
Nice tribute to the "almost" moments of our lives. Congratulations Sabina
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Date: 12/16/2011 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:27:00 PM
Close is not enough, almost doesn't take the prize....nicely expressed.
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Date: 11/13/2011 9:14:00 PM
Nice couplet Sabina..u almost fit, just the way things are some times. Love mathy
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Date: 11/13/2011 8:23:00 PM
Sabina, deep ways of expression,, Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..p.d.
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