Sabina Nicole Poet Couplet

You Almost Fit

You almost fit with harmony,
But almost would be the death of me,
You came real close to complimenting my space,
But real close would leave me in an empty place,
The puzzle piece I can no longer wedge,
I made my vow and said my pledge,
Later on deep regret would follow,
And once again I'd become hollow,
You almost fit with ecstasy,
But almost would be the death of me.

By: Sabina Nicole

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John Freeman December 17, 2011 at 11:06 AM Wishing you Merry Holidays and happy New Year!!!Almost not quit good enought Sabina, as you said. Nice vers, Congrats on your worthy poem place. Agape, Moses

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 17, 2011 at 4:06 AM Enjoyed this.Congratulations Sabina; that is a family name im my fathers line. Happinees to you and yours x

Bob Quigley December 16, 2011 at 10:50 PM Nice tribute to the "almost" moments of our lives. Congratulations Sabina

Carol Sunshine Brown December 16, 2011 at 12:59 PM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contest Sabina. Love, Carol

Leo Larry Amadore November 13, 2011 at 9:27 PM Close is not enough, almost doesn't take the prize....nicely expressed.

Mathias Yakubu November 13, 2011 at 9:14 PM Nice couplet Sabina..u almost fit, just the way things are some times. Love mathy

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2011 at 8:23 PM Sabina, deep ways of expression,, Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..p.d.