You

Everything I am, everything I know starts and ends with you. Even when I have hit my lowest, You always seem to pull me through. You can hold me in place with just one touch, one second glance and I melt. You are my greatest accomplishment, the most love I have ever felt. From your sweet words to your daze inducing smile. Your funny jokes make me laugh I am mesmerized by your style. Promise me you will be here. Forever with me to stay. If I ever lose you My whole existence will go astray. You see my heart, never will I be afraid of lies So sweep me in my love, let me get lost in those eyes.

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/22/2018 8:08:00 PM

Oh my!!! This is so beautiful and romantic. Every moment whispers love. I can feel your heart in every word, as these thoughts softly touch the page. I am truly in awe. Simply breathtaking indeed. ~ Brandy

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/6/2018 6:23:00 PM

Oh this is so romantic, Laken. And where have you been? It's been a while! Nevertheless I'm glad to see you back and wishing a happy new year... hugs and smiles :)

Laken Smith
Date: 1/8/2018 5:46:00 PM

Thank you my friend! I have been a little busy and alot has happened. Hugs and smiles to you :) can't wait to see what you've come up with in my absence

Silent One

Date: 12/25/2017 6:03:00 AM

A wonderful romantic write...Great pen Laken..

Laken Smith
Date: 1/8/2018 5:46:00 PM

Thank you so much. I hope you are well