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About: This is a special poem for those, who want to show a bit of love to the ones they love. By words so sweet, they make the heart glitter. Share this poem to really anyone you want, special. Especially, on Valentine's day. Because words so touching can make life more precious. ATTENTION: This poem was originally posted on: wattpad.com & forums.familyfriendpoems.com/ricoelhady by the author, herself. No one other. Username used: ricoelhady
When I looked at you, I saw the world, drawn in front of me, Nothing erasing it, the pencil just keeps going, on and on and on, Your eyes so bright, they shined the world, with colors drawn from you, Your smile spreads, warmth of a fire, deep into my heart, When I touched your hand, a spark enlightened me, to smile so big, the heavens expanded, When you're here, next to me, I know the world, will always be alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 2:24 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Anthony Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 12:48 AM
Waow! I love the first versed stanza which tries to compare the beauty of the world in front of the naked eyes with the loved one. Perfect work, says, ABED
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