You

You are like darkness,
Exhausting and consuming.
You are like complete loneliness,
Silent and crooning.

You are like a shooting comet,
All sparks and glare.
You are like a winning bet,
As ushering as a stare.

You are like the glow of flames,
Ever so breath taking.
You are like accusing blames,
All smouldering and raking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 6:58 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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