You

Who rocks
Who swings
Who knocks me off my feet

Who laughs
Who gleams
Who makes my heart do strange things

Who gazes
Who dreams
Who can do incredible things

Who beams
Who glows
Who I hope feels for me too

Is non-other than you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Campese Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 10:17 AM
I love how simplistic this is, yet it manages to have a strong meaning. I love it!
Cronnelly Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thank you!
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Noah,this is acute love poem.
Cronnelly Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Eeeeyyyyyy!!!!! Also if acute is the poem type, I'll change it to that
Cronnelly Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 7:06 PM
I added in the fourth stanza (correct me if I'm wrong) to help the poem flow better.
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