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Flower Beautiful fragrant Swaying enthralling calling In a splendour of rhythm and rhyme Listening looking laughing Love care You _______________________________________________ 12/10/2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/25/2016 5:10:00 AM

Romantic and crystalline.... Congrats Probir, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/25/2016 5:42:00 AM

Thank you ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2016 2:08:00 PM

Very romantic one that is on the winners' page..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/23/2016 1:54:00 AM

Thank you ...

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/22/2016 9:39:00 AM

Nice piece and congrats for your placement.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 12:35:00 PM

Thank you ...

Darren White

Date: 10/22/2016 4:09:00 AM

Flower.... You.... Beautiful, congratulations!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 5:51:00 AM

Thank you ...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/21/2016 10:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 12:54:00 AM

Thank you ...

Janis Thompson

Date: 10/21/2016 8:55:00 PM

A well written diamante. I am going to send you soup mail. Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest. As always, Probir, you are the romantic poet.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 12:55:00 AM

Thank you for liking my Diamante ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/13/2016 3:24:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Probir. Simply beautiful. The diamante form seems difficult to me, but hey, you are so gifted, I can see why you say it isn't for you. Well crafted and expressed exquisitely. Ty for reading my work, my friend. Much love and respect to you.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/22/2016 12:56:00 AM

Thank you ... Sorry for the delay ...

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/13/2016 9:41:00 AM

I have always loved reading Diamante poems but not so much crafting them, well done :) Love, Juli-Michelle

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2016 11:14:00 AM

Thank you ... This is my first diamante poem ... but I find writing Diamante interesting and easy too ... Let me see if I can post a few more Diamante ...