You

Flower
Beautiful fragrant
Swaying enthralling calling
In a splendour of rhythm and rhyme
Listening looking laughing
Love care
You 
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12/10/2016

beautifulcareflowerlovediamante

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Teddy Kimathi

October 25, 2016 at 5:10 AM

Romantic and crystalline.... Congrats Probir, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Probir Gupta

October 25, 2016 at 5:42 AM

Thank you ...

Sara Kendrick

October 22, 2016 at 2:08 PM

Very romantic one that is on the winners' page..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Probir Gupta

October 23, 2016 at 1:54 AM

Thank you ...

Anisha Dutta

October 22, 2016 at 9:39 AM

Nice piece and congrats for your placement.

Probir Gupta

October 22, 2016 at 12:35 PM

Thank you ...

Darren White

October 22, 2016 at 4:09 AM

Flower.... You.... Beautiful, congratulations!

Probir Gupta

October 22, 2016 at 5:51 AM

Thank you ...

Afzal Nusker

October 21, 2016 at 10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, Probir.

Probir Gupta

October 22, 2016 at 12:54 AM

Thank you ...

Janis Medders Tobechi

October 21, 2016 at 8:55 PM

A well written diamante. I am going to send you soup mail. Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest. As always, Probir, you are the romantic poet.

Probir Gupta

October 22, 2016 at 12:55 AM

Thank you for liking my Diamante ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 13, 2016 at 3:24 PM

Beautiful poem, Probir. Simply beautiful. The diamante form seems difficult to me, but hey, you are so gifted, I can see why you say it isn't for you. Well crafted and expressed exquisitely. Ty for reading my work, my friend. Much love and respect to you.

Probir Gupta

October 22, 2016 at 12:56 AM

Thank you ... Sorry for the delay ...

Juli- Michelle

October 13, 2016 at 9:41 AM

I have always loved reading Diamante poems but not so much crafting them, well done :) Love, Juli-Michelle

Probir Gupta

October 13, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Thank you ... This is my first diamante poem ... but I find writing Diamante interesting and easy too ... Let me see if I can post a few more Diamante ...