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Have you ever, wandered into, a sequestered meadow
Surrounded by trees and mountains
Where the passerine song birds, sang songs with no words
Indian paintbrushes, rose up, like red fountains
The orange day lilies, and butterfly weeds
Danced, with the light purple asters
Bold black eyed susans and multicolored lupines
Provided scenes, like paintings, of old masters

Did you feel the cool breeze, that tickled the leaves
Of the poplars, birches and oaks
Put off by the snow caps, as they melt and collapse
Then ski down the shadowy slopes
Or happen to look, when the clear snow melt brook
Rushed by, to the lake of, serenity
Did you feel the love, of Mother Nature's hug
And the awesomeness of it's, sublimity

To put words to a feeling, when the senses are reeling
Can be a difficult thing
Meadows sleeping with mountains,  flowery red fountains
With a breeze of tranquility
That's how I felt, when ice started to melt
Encasing my frozen heart
I'll never forget, when our paths first met
And you gave, my life, a jump start


  an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/5/2023 11:49:00 AM
The last four lines is your unique signature write, DT!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/5/2023 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Maggie:) I think:)
Date: 6/29/2017 5:29:00 PM
A breathtaking painting you have painted here Daniel excellent job!!
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Date: 8/21/2016 6:54:00 PM
A stunning "landscape" swirling of great love and beauty. Your tender words express a most idyllic place, where everyday worries fall by the wayside, clearing the way for a wondrous connecting of souls with nature as it's only witness. A lovely piece full of devotion to the joy of what together" really means. An absolute pleasure to read:-) blessings, lynn
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/21/2016 8:23:00 PM
This write was inspired by a very dear friend. I was overjoyed at the reception it was given. Thank you Lynn for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 7/6/2016 3:37:00 PM
Hey Daniel what a beautiful write! Love of nature and love combined in one poem, very special combo. Congrats on POTD! well deserved!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/6/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you John. I really appreciate you taking time to read and leave such friendly comments.
Date: 7/5/2016 5:19:00 AM
God....how lovely. The mix of love of nature and love of her. And the colours.....
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/5/2016 6:48:00 AM
It's just a love poem, Jean. That her could be you. Thank you for the lovely comments and for your time. Since I'm not in love I have to make believe.
Date: 7/4/2016 3:05:00 AM
Congrats for POTD....Nicely written.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/4/2016 4:51:00 AM
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your time and your friendly comments.
Date: 7/4/2016 2:40:00 AM
Came again to congratulate on your well deserved POTD:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/4/2016 4:50:00 AM
Thank you Jo I really appreciate your kind consideration. The flowers are lovely.
Date: 7/3/2016 7:08:00 PM
Congrats to you Daniel on this POTD and thank you for the "jump start" to very pleasant memories when the " senses were reeling!"
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Walter, you are indeed a gentleman and a scholar. I appreciate the kindness and the beautiful flowers.
Date: 7/3/2016 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations. As perfect as it needs to be and written in your own unique style. Like line to put words to a feeling . . David from NZ
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thank you David. I really appreciate the kudos and for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 7/3/2016 4:26:00 PM
Congrats !!!!! Nicely penned.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 7:02:00 PM
Thank you kind sir, I appreciate the flowers.
Date: 7/3/2016 4:16:00 PM
Well deserving of potd. Very nice job.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 7:01:00 PM
Thank you Jolene. I appreciate the flowers.
Date: 7/3/2016 11:11:00 AM
So very beautiful, Daniel, as you image the loveliness of nature with the blooming of new love. Congratulations on your deserved poem being honored as Poem Of The Day. 7 Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Sandra. I'd like to think the feeling of love is a lot like the beauty of nature. I certainly appreciate the kind comments and the value of your time.
Date: 7/3/2016 7:35:00 AM
You You You!...great work my friend Daniel...and congrats!!!...god bless...^WW^
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Winged Man I appreciate your support and flattering comments.
Date: 7/3/2016 7:24:00 AM
- Congratulations, Daniel :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise:)
Date: 7/3/2016 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations you do deserve this. This is wonderful imagery in nature and the first meeting WOW! :o
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Sunita. I appreciate the flowers.
Date: 7/3/2016 6:59:00 AM
One of the your best works DT. Simple beautiful and most deserving of POTD honors...congratulations
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/3/2016 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. I appreciate the warm comments. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/2/2016 6:35:00 PM
Absolute beauty in poetic form. You captured and held my attention as nature and emotion danced an enthralling choreograph. Love it ... CayCay
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/2/2016 7:35:00 PM
Thank you, Cay Cay. Your lovely comments are always so heart warming. I am thrilled that you enjoyed the read and you know I always appreciate your friendly visits.
Date: 7/2/2016 11:07:00 AM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend based on excellent imagination. Loved always, bl
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/2/2016 11:25:00 AM
Thank you BL. Love poems are a little hard for me to write, since I am not in love. lol I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment and will look forward to your next friendly visit.
Date: 7/2/2016 8:49:00 AM
- Daniel, I find this very beautiful - You have described it with your inner emotions that touches my heart - So much beauty around us ...... makes me feel speechless - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... Happy weekend :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/2/2016 9:35:00 AM
Thank you A-L. I am touched that you appreciate my words. Love emotes a feeling like no other. I am grateful for your kind words and hope, just maybe, I have warmed your heart just a little. You are so right, beauty is all around us.
Date: 7/2/2016 6:11:00 AM
Yes i have, also wandered through this amazing poetry..superb,,
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/2/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Harry for appreciating my love poem. You sir, are a true poetry lover. Your visits always leave a smile and I hope to see you again, soon. Happy 4th and be safe.
Date: 7/2/2016 4:20:00 AM
Wow! This is one of your best poems that I've ever read:) Loved it:) Superb:) A #7+++:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/2/2016 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo. You flatter me! Trying to describe a feeling to another person in descriptive words Can be a difficult thing, especially when your words are directed to that person. Sell but not over sell, you know. I enjoy your lovely visits and hope to see you soon.
Date: 7/1/2016 9:57:00 PM
OMG Daniel, that is so beautiful it made me cry. You are an outstanding poet, I don't care what anybody says! If words like that don't melt the heart, you just can't be human. Definitely a fav!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/1/2016 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Jeannie, I appreciate those kind words. It makes me feel good to know that someone can appreciate my humble offerings. Thanks for the heart smile:)
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