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My eyes have danced along the lines of your sex, wanting to behold what's most complex Hard and soft Soft and hard Go deeper, push into my heart Wet as water Warm as the sun Thrusting deep inside until we are one Enter my mind, Ravish my soul, Breathing and moaning I relinquish control I surrender only to you, Because this passion originated with you No, another won't do My sex wants only you

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Laxman Rao

Date: 4/12/2016 2:06:00 AM

Nice one ...loved to read it twice. Sex is the most passionate pleasure that releases ones compressed senses and a caged soul. Regards Rao

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 1:52:00 PM

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Latisha Mcdougall
Date: 3/31/2016 1:52:00 PM

Thank you!