You

My eyes have danced along the lines of your sex, wanting to behold what's most complex

Hard and soft
Soft and hard

Go deeper, push into my heart

Wet as water
Warm as the sun

Thrusting deep inside until we are one

Enter my mind,
Ravish my soul,

Breathing and moaning

I relinquish control

I surrender only to you,
Because this passion originated with you 

No, another won't do
My sex wants only you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rao Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 2:06 AM
Nice one ...loved to read it twice. Sex is the most passionate pleasure that releases ones compressed senses and a caged soul. Regards Rao
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March 31, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Latisha, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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March 31, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Thank you!
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