You

You.. Were my words.....my thoughts...and dreams...
Condensed once ..to rain in my heart
Was u a mirage..dont know
You were an exaggeration of my emotions and
Thought....virtual...my trust in vain
And my heart in pain.
But i can bear this...and
Wait..for the next life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 7, 2014 at 8:03 PM
Sanjana,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 28, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Thank u for all ur kind words and support....but m unhappy dat m not much able to convey my thoughts in english I am an indian..from kerala and i write in my mothertongue...malayalam Anyway m happy to b here...and thank u all again
Gibson Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sanjana. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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June 27, 2014 at 8:53 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sanjana :) - I choose your first well written but sad poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 27, 2014 at 12:27 AM
HeLLo Sanjana, Welcome to PS I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing .. Hope to follow up all your work ..Your new PS friend RRC
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 11:31 AM
Oh i feel a sound of despair in the words but I hope you will find the hope and love soon..:) WARM WELCOME to Poetrysoup! I have been here 'bout 2 years now and I am enjoying my time here..:) I got lots of learning here..:) and I hope to you will..:) Congratulations and God bless..:)!
Hyler Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
A   Avatar
June 26, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Sanjana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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