You

You.. Were my words.....my thoughts...and dreams... Condensed once ..to rain in my heart Was u a mirage..dont know You were an exaggeration of my emotions and Thought....virtual...my trust in vain And my heart in pain. But i can bear this...and Wait..for the next life

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Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 8:03:00 PM

Sanjana,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sanjana S Prasad

Date: 6/28/2014 1:31:00 AM

Thank u for all ur kind words and support....but m unhappy dat m not much able to convey my thoughts in english I am an indian..from kerala and i write in my mothertongue...malayalam Anyway m happy to b here...and thank u all again

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/27/2014 5:45:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sanjana. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/27/2014 8:53:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sanjana :) - I choose your first well written but sad poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Muhereza Rodgers Roger

Date: 6/27/2014 12:27:00 AM

HeLLo Sanjana, Welcome to PS I believe you will have a wonderful experience here as we enjoy all your poetic art and heart, You are now part of a great family that i believe will be a great blessing .. Hope to follow up all your work ..Your new PS friend RRC

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/26/2014 11:31:00 AM

Oh i feel a sound of despair in the words but I hope you will find the hope and love soon..:) WARM WELCOME to Poetrysoup! I have been here 'bout 2 years now and I am enjoying my time here..:) I got lots of learning here..:) and I hope to you will..:) Congratulations and God bless..:)!

James Hyler

Date: 6/26/2014 11:07:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2014 7:18:00 AM

Sanjana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@