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*It was you who ........Ruined everything *I miss ....... My old life *The peacefulness ........Before you brought chaos *When i was with you ........Everyday was torture *Everything was different ........The way the darkness consumed *My lovely days, the way ........The wretchedness of *your laugh makes me ........Vomit. Those days i could still *Giggle freely, forget the world and have fun .........Are now gone *You stole my ........Freedom and *My heart ........ You deprived me of justice *I hope ........You die, along with *Your love for me ........ I don't believe that this loneliness *Is never ending (Now read only the lines with an asterisk *) ~~This is just another feeble attempt. Similar to my previous poem "It was only me" A bit more sunnier

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Date: 2/22/2014 8:58:00 AM
It bit more sunnier..I have never seen vomit used in a poem before..lol... This was good..keep them coming....Tim
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Date: 2/22/2014 7:27:00 PM
Ahahahaha, well, i had to use something, vomit just got me. Thank you for your compliment. God Bless :) --Lala

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