You

*It was you who
........Ruined everything
*I miss
....... My old life
*The peacefulness 
........Before you brought chaos 
*When i was with you
........Everyday was torture
*Everything was different 
........The way the darkness consumed
*My lovely days, the way 
........The wretchedness of 
*your laugh makes me
........Vomit. Those days i could still 
*Giggle freely, forget the world and have fun
.........Are now gone
*You stole my 
........Freedom and 
*My heart
........ You deprived me of justice
*I hope  
........You die, along with
*Your love for me 
........ I don't believe that this loneliness
*Is never ending

(Now read only the lines with an asterisk *)

~~This is just another feeble attempt. Similar to my previous poem "It was only me"
A bit more sunnier
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 8:58 AM
It bit more sunnier..I have never seen vomit used in a poem before..lol... This was good..keep them coming....Tim
Merx Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Ahahahaha, well, i had to use something, vomit just got me. Thank you for your compliment. God Bless :) --Lala
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