You

You
just I met
and gazed into
Your
exquisite eyes shining as
brilliantly as the moonlight
casting its delicate reflection across
the steel gray waters of the deepest sea
and
of the darkest night.
You
I saw standing there
waiting patiently for me
Your
smile is the source of my
contentment
as radiant as the glowing stars in a cloudless night
reaching out to caress my face so sweetly
sultry enough to dissipate
my every objection and rejection of
You
being carelessly near to me
plummeting so deep into some
thing that may be beyond what love is
or can ever be
could I bear to let go of my rationality to embark into
this vast passion beside
You
that superficially consumes entirely and spews out
remnants of me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 12:05 PM
Oh, what a passionate love poem! I wrote a poem called "You" as well, but that was a long time ago and wasn't as complex, it was very simple -this is good work Christina! MC
Holmes Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 12:01 AM
Thank you Marquis. This is one of my first "Lovey-Dovey" poems.
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