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YOU

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YOU

YOU

Your 
Uncaring eyes
Push me 
Repulsively 
Praise me down 
In a pit of abysmal. 
Your balance ego 
Keeps me on the void
Painted walls
Hidden truth

Take heed
While I, 
Twitch
Bitter 
Words 
Of yuck
Behind your back.

~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 8/29/2016 5:28:00 PM
Wow! This really touched me. Very deep emotions and imagery. Bravo! ~ Phillip
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Date: 7/13/2016 1:49:00 AM
Beautiful!!!
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Date: 6/22/2016 8:36:00 AM
where are at SKAT,, great poem
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Date: 4/29/2016 3:33:00 AM
Such little word yet saying so much...great write Skat, definitely caught my attention
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Date: 2/23/2016 3:28:00 PM
I must say this quite the poem I guess a vain man has to be the worst
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations Skat on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Skat !
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:59:00 PM
Love it, Skat. BIg CONGRATs!
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:56:00 AM
Skat, In enjoyed the read this morning. Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:58:00 AM
fantastic write Skat A! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/3/2015 8:46:00 AM
My friend Skat, hopefully this situation has run its course. Just remember, that sometimes we pick our grapes too soon and end up with bad wine. "Their will be no wine before it's time." True love will find you. Always Ken
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Date: 5/22/2015 11:06:00 AM
Very expressive and deep-felt words, Skat! I hope since then the situation has been solved, preferably by moving on and away! hugs // paul
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Date: 5/13/2015 12:14:00 AM
Thank you SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2015 1:23:00 PM
Interesting.
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:02:00 PM
What can you do about you. Peace. :) Hope you've had a nice weekend SKAT.
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Date: 8/29/2014 4:51:00 PM
This is great!
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Date: 5/17/2014 11:26:00 PM
Very well done...... Gina
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Date: 3/12/2014 3:29:00 AM
Me you stew chew Bleeding exorcised Beautiful blue Red cauterised Tomorrow new Banished why’s Kaleidoscopic view Open wide eyes Me you hue mues
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Date: 3/10/2014 3:09:00 AM
Glorious Dear friend...You are not only a good poet but also a great person . I love you so much ... Best wishes from India forever...
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Date: 2/1/2014 7:28:00 AM
I know a few of your yous!...I like this poem very much, stirred quite a few bitter memories, and isn't that the aim of a poet, to stir emotions, good or bad?! Well done SKAT, Robert xoxoxo
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Date: 1/22/2014 3:13:00 AM
Its so nice of Skat. Like it <3
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Date: 1/2/2014 9:38:00 PM
Straight to the point... I like I like
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Date: 12/9/2013 3:10:00 AM
DEEP !
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Date: 12/6/2013 10:29:00 AM
† 'You,' Yes And I Do Not Know, If Anyone Has Ever Told 'You,' How Very Beautiful 'You Are;' I Am Sure A Million Times But, I Just Wanted To Remind, 'You.' ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John
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Date: 12/2/2013 4:32:00 AM
what a disgusting man here.. a great attitude, hope she leaves soon... Skaatt, love your words, i just havent got much time lately and some more, no computer :( thankfully i have my android to keep up with ur strong words (kiss and hug)
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