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YOU Your Uncaring eyes Push me Repulsively Praise me down In a pit of abysmal. Your balance ego Keeps me on the void Painted walls Hidden truth Take heed While I, Twitch Bitter Words Of yuck Behind your back. ~*~

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Ernest Robles

Date: 8/29/2016 5:28:00 PM

Wow! This really touched me. Very deep emotions and imagery. Bravo! ~ Phillip

Yuhi Musinga

Date: 7/13/2016 1:49:00 AM

Beautiful!!!

Busani Zuma

Date: 6/22/2016 8:36:00 AM

where are at SKAT,, great poem

Bihu Johri

Date: 4/29/2016 3:33:00 AM

Such little word yet saying so much...great write Skat, definitely caught my attention

Nisreen Aa

Date: 2/23/2016 3:28:00 PM

I must say this quite the poem I guess a vain man has to be the worst

Michael Tor

Date: 9/28/2015 10:40:00 PM

Congratulations Skat on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2015 12:49:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Skat !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2015 8:59:00 PM

Love it, Skat. BIg CONGRATs!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/27/2015 9:56:00 AM

Skat, In enjoyed the read this morning. Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/27/2015 8:58:00 AM

fantastic write Skat A! Congrats on your win!

Ken Jordan

Date: 6/3/2015 8:46:00 AM

My friend Skat, hopefully this situation has run its course. Just remember, that sometimes we pick our grapes too soon and end up with bad wine. "Their will be no wine before it's time." True love will find you. Always Ken

Paul Callus

Date: 5/22/2015 11:06:00 AM

Very expressive and deep-felt words, Skat! I hope since then the situation has been solved, preferably by moving on and away! hugs // paul

Ell Harry

Date: 5/13/2015 12:14:00 AM

Thank you SKAT

Trenton Moore

Date: 4/30/2015 1:23:00 PM

Interesting.

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/25/2015 6:02:00 PM

What can you do about you. Peace. :) Hope you've had a nice weekend SKAT.

Asad Aamir

Date: 8/29/2014 4:51:00 PM

This is great!

Gina Montalbo

Date: 5/17/2014 11:26:00 PM

Very well done...... Gina

Dennis Broe-Ward

Date: 3/12/2014 3:29:00 AM

Me you stew chew Bleeding exorcised Beautiful blue Red cauterised Tomorrow new Banished why’s Kaleidoscopic view Open wide eyes Me you hue mues

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/10/2014 3:09:00 AM

Glorious Dear friend...You are not only a good poet but also a great person . I love you so much ... Best wishes from India forever...

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/1/2014 7:28:00 AM

I know a few of your yous!...I like this poem very much, stirred quite a few bitter memories, and isn't that the aim of a poet, to stir emotions, good or bad?! Well done SKAT, Robert xoxoxo

Rasel Khan

Date: 1/22/2014 3:13:00 AM

Its so nice of Skat. Like it <3

Jillian Werick

Date: 1/2/2014 9:38:00 PM

Straight to the point... I like I like

Kitty Jones

Date: 12/9/2013 3:10:00 AM

DEEP !

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/6/2013 10:29:00 AM

† 'You,' Yes And I Do Not Know, If Anyone Has Ever Told 'You,' How Very Beautiful 'You Are;' I Am Sure A Million Times But, I Just Wanted To Remind, 'You.' ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/2/2013 4:32:00 AM

what a disgusting man here.. a great attitude, hope she leaves soon... Skaatt, love your words, i just havent got much time lately and some more, no computer :( thankfully i have my android to keep up with ur strong words (kiss and hug)