Skat A Poet Free verse

You

YOU

Your 
Uncaring eyes
Push me 
Repulsively 
Praise me down 
In a pit of abysmal. 
Your balance ego 
Keeps me on the void
Painted walls
Hidden truth

Take heed
While I, 
Twitch
Bitter 
Words 
Of yuck
Behind your back.

~*~

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Ernest Robles August 29, 2016 at 5:28 PM Wow! This really touched me. Very deep emotions and imagery. Bravo! ~ Phillip

Yuhi Musinga July 13, 2016 at 1:49 AM Beautiful!!!

Busani Zuma June 22, 2016 at 8:36 AM where are at SKAT,, great poem

Bihu Johri April 29, 2016 at 3:33 AM Such little word yet saying so much...great write Skat, definitely caught my attention

Nisreen Aa February 23, 2016 at 3:28 PM I must say this quite the poem I guess a vain man has to be the worst

Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 10:40 PM Congratulations Skat on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 28, 2015 at 12:49 AM Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Skat !

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2015 at 8:59 PM Love it, Skat. BIg CONGRATs!

Alexis Y. September 27, 2015 at 9:56 AM Skat, In enjoyed the read this morning. Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Tammy Reams September 27, 2015 at 8:58 AM fantastic write Skat A! Congrats on your win!

Ken Jordan June 3, 2015 at 8:46 AM My friend Skat, hopefully this situation has run its course. Just remember, that sometimes we pick our grapes too soon and end up with bad wine. "Their will be no wine before it's time." True love will find you. Always Ken

Paul Callus May 22, 2015 at 11:06 AM Very expressive and deep-felt words, Skat! I hope since then the situation has been solved, preferably by moving on and away! hugs // paul

Ell Harry May 13, 2015 at 12:14 AM Thank you SKAT

Trenton Moore April 30, 2015 at 1:23 PM Interesting.

Robert Johnson January 25, 2015 at 6:02 PM What can you do about you. Peace. :) Hope you've had a nice weekend SKAT.

Asad Aamir August 29, 2014 at 4:51 PM This is great!

Gina Montalbo May 17, 2014 at 11:26 PM Very well done...... Gina

Dennis Broe-Ward March 12, 2014 at 3:29 AM Me you stew chew Bleeding exorcised Beautiful blue Red cauterised Tomorrow new Banished why’s Kaleidoscopic view Open wide eyes Me you hue mues

Sandip Goswami March 10, 2014 at 3:09 AM Glorious Dear friend...You are not only a good poet but also a great person . I love you so much ... Best wishes from India forever...

Robert Rogers February 1, 2014 at 7:28 AM I know a few of your yous!...I like this poem very much, stirred quite a few bitter memories, and isn't that the aim of a poet, to stir emotions, good or bad?! Well done SKAT, Robert xoxoxo

Rasel Khan January 22, 2014 at 3:13 AM Its so nice of Skat. Like it <3

Jillian Werick January 2, 2014 at 9:38 PM Straight to the point... I like I like

Kitty Jones December 9, 2013 at 3:10 AM DEEP !

Johnny Rhinem December 6, 2013 at 10:29 AM † 'You,' Yes And I Do Not Know, If Anyone Has Ever Told 'You,' How Very Beautiful 'You Are;' I Am Sure A Million Times But, I Just Wanted To Remind, 'You.' ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

Dinda Minardi December 2, 2013 at 4:32 AM what a disgusting man here.. a great attitude, hope she leaves soon... Skaatt, love your words, i just havent got much time lately and some more, no computer :( thankfully i have my android to keep up with ur strong words (kiss and hug)

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