You

You so young so tender
Very much lady like you are too
Grandeur just like pacific blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cox Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Good job enjoyable thank you for sharing
A   Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Udayan, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Soft & Beautiful, haiku - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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September 14, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Udayan, you, says a lot... i love it...xox~pd
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