You

You Always Are there to Brighten my days And leave me smiling from ear to ear I wish to be held by you forever If only you Knew how I Felt about You

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/17/2013 9:45:00 PM

Dear Rebecca, YOUR Versatality in Forms is Remarkable. this is a Perfect Tetractys. The "YOU" in this POEM is very lucky for YOU to put YOUR Heart out for. YOUR line "felt about" could be felt for, or felt with to be 2 syllables.Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/24/2012 10:31:00 AM

Another nice tetractys...you have mastered this form. Very good write...enjoyed!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/21/2011 5:29:00 PM

Ah! How sweet. :-P I wonder who that one's for....*hmmmmmmm* Joker: ME of course!!!!! Laura: hahaahaha! Indeed! Always, Laura

Rebecca Larkin
Date: 12/22/2011 5:07:00 PM

you're such a dork lol :P . . . and yes it is about whom you think it is--what's your point? hahaha

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 12:55:00 PM

Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Rebecca. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol