You

You
Always
Are there to
Brighten my days
And leave me smiling from ear to ear

I wish to be held by you forever
If only you
Knew how I
Felt about
You
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 17, 2013 at 9:45 PM
Dear Rebecca, YOUR Versatality in Forms is Remarkable. this is a Perfect Tetractys. The "YOU" in this POEM is very lucky for YOU to put YOUR Heart out for. YOUR line "felt about" could be felt for, or felt with to be 2 syllables.Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
Rozario Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:31 AM
Another nice tetractys...you have mastered this form. Very good write...enjoyed!!
Breidenthal Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Ah! How sweet. :-P I wonder who that one's for....*hmmmmmmm* Joker: ME of course!!!!! Laura: hahaahaha! Indeed! Always, Laura
Larkin Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 5:07 PM
you're such a dork lol :P . . . and yes it is about whom you think it is--what's your point? hahaha
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December 8, 2011 at 12:55 PM
Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Rebecca. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol
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