You

realizing how lonely
the cold night grows
when I'm sinking into
an empty abyss of lies
I can't seem to free
myself from your choke 
hold while I'm still 
breathing you in like
a poison gas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 1, 2011 at 11:39 PM
we've all had the experience. But very well written Keep writing :)
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