You

You
I see
In my mind
As memories
Kissing me by way of mental pictures
Through sideshows of intimate encounters
Briance my love
In memoirs
I see
You
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 7:37 PM
So gentle and romantic Johnny, I like the way the beginning and end repeat. Repetition is satisfying for my mind in poetry and you gave a nice image.
Baldwin Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 1:25 PM
A snap shot of special moments in time...very well done
Mehta Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 6:23 PM
perfect tetractys, Johnny
Mac Donald Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 10:04 AM
A beautiful dedication to "Briance", Johnny! A memorable walk through these avenues of love. Nicely penned! Best wishes, Mikki
Mehta Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Lovely passionate feelings of love , Johny
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