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You I see In my mind As memories Kissing me by way of mental pictures Through sideshows of intimate encounters Briance my love In memoirs I see You

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Date: 8/14/2011 7:37:00 PM
So gentle and romantic Johnny, I like the way the beginning and end repeat. Repetition is satisfying for my mind in poetry and you gave a nice image.
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Date: 6/18/2011 1:25:00 PM
A snap shot of special moments in time...very well done
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:23:00 PM
perfect tetractys, Johnny
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Date: 6/17/2011 10:04:00 AM
A beautiful dedication to "Briance", Johnny! A memorable walk through these avenues of love. Nicely penned! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:57:00 AM
Lovely passionate feelings of love , Johny
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