You

You were once the sun
When I was the earth
You kept me warm
Without you, 
there was no life.

Now you are nothing more than 
A cold, lifeless rock
Floating in
the unforgiving space

You float without purpose
Your destination unknown.
When you crash and burn
Remeber me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 19, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Wow. Deep.
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