You

YOU I barely met YOU As I peek a glance YOU are exquisite My words are lost My heart skips a beat We depart ways My mind wanders My dreams escape My wonders fade My smile grows My day waits As the night comes with you in tow I'm stricken wit YOU

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William Darnell Sr.

Date: 8/11/2023 2:25:00 AM

Very beautifully penned and versed. A fresh love waits! I enjoyed reading about your inner emotion, thanks for sharing with us. Have a Great Day! Best Wishes, William

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/9/2023 9:16:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/7/2023 7:22:00 AM

Just beautiful, April:-) Welcome to Poetrysoup, my friend. Keep writing!