You

I fall down, you pick me up.

I frown, you put a smile on my face.

I cry, you make me laugh.

I loose my step, you help me find it again.

I love you, you love me back.

You never let me down.

You are my life now.

Whatever happens with you and I, I know you will never let me go!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/19/2009 2:21:00 AM
Emily, This poem is full of love. It is well written. One question, though. Is this about the same person that your next poem is about? DAS-j
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:27:00 PM
Very pretty em...........yeah i finally got an account so you could see how bad i suck at poetry lol -Jessica
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Date: 5/1/2009 4:34:00 PM
God is always there for us.
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Date: 5/1/2009 2:03:00 PM
Ah,...the marks of a poet! Don't stop! james
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Date: 5/1/2009 12:46:00 PM
Hey, kid, you got it MADE! Simple, direct, good content, sensitive...what more does a poem need. Love, daver
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Date: 5/1/2009 6:38:00 AM
Very sweet Emily
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Date: 4/30/2009 11:26:00 AM
i wrote that cause i couldnt fall asleep one night but thanks any ways
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Date: 4/30/2009 10:20:00 AM
I like it.
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Date: 4/30/2009 8:59:00 AM
aww this is wonderfull!
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Date: 4/30/2009 8:32:00 AM
Wonderful write of love and comfort...to have the knowledge that they will be there no matter what is very reassuring.
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